* Can You See Me? *
I had awoken to a new world, an awkward sense telling me, now this is it,
get up, out of bed now, though no sensation, felt no breath, though a steady
urge to rely on anything, I am certain now, I do not live anymore, another journey somehow…near the other side of anything, innocence calling ….searching…
running to meet, no speed, no slowing, a notion… in color, telling of, nothing
ever knowing anyone…where is this place?.. for I cannot find myself here, if I still be?
Can you see me?
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A short story,
By Laz Freedman 28/2/2011
Nice.
mkusherman - June 26, 2012 at 11:54 pm |
I Thank you! M.Kusherman
Peace,
Laz
lazfreedman - June 28, 2012 at 12:23 am |
Laz – I can see you.
VivianLea Doubt - June 30, 2012 at 4:02 pm |
I think you can…VivianLea my friend
Thank you,
Peace,x
Laz
lazfreedman - June 30, 2012 at 10:05 pm |
Reblogged this on Me, and my imaginary friend and commented:
Can you see me? Maybe that is the quintessential human question…
VivianLea Doubt - June 30, 2012 at 4:02 pm |
Thank’s VivianLea!
Peace,
😉 Laz
lazfreedman - June 30, 2012 at 10:07 pm |
Yes, I can see you.Thank you, VivianLea.
Love Dede
Liz Boman-Rasmuson - July 25, 2012 at 4:54 pm |
😉 All The Best,
Peace, x
laz
lazfreedman - July 25, 2012 at 9:42 pm
Reblogged this on Athena Richardson Journal and commented:
athenawrichardsonb0 - September 4, 2012 at 5:26 am |
Wow – how did I miss this, Laz? Great poem.
Monica - November 7, 2018 at 1:40 am |