Laz Freedman's Poetry Blog
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___ When You Go ___


Take me

With you,

When you


By Laz.F.29/6/2010


5 Responses to “___ When You Go ___”

  1. This one Laz, brings back memories of childhood, when a favourite cousin went away to University, “I would, if I could, but I can’t” ….words which pierce the heart of a youngster wanting new Horizons…
    alternatively, a discussion I had with my ex…before the split.’can we go together’ was a cheerful subject …on death!! (OK,the thinking was that Death was a long, long time away, still is um…I hope!!) xx

  2. I just love this, Laz. Such a universal description.

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