Laz Freedman's Poetry Blog
Moving right along with you

*When You Go*

Please

Take me

With you,

When you

Go…

______

By Laz.F.29/6/2010

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4 Responses to “*When You Go*”

  1. powerful!
    lovely poem!

  2. How many instances is this repeated in words and silence, from humans and dogs? This touched me deeply on a personal level as I read it. I agree with Jingle, it is very powerful.

    Peace, my friend,
    Suzanne


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