Laz Freedman's Poetry Blog
Moving right along with you

__ Green and Blue __

Forest Paths,

Lead us too…

Green and blue

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By Laz.F.30 /4/2010

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4 Responses to “__ Green and Blue __”

  1. Lovely – it makes me think of a hike I take every year to the cascade falls in Tahoe!!!

  2. I love your word selection and phrasing. The path becomes filled with power to lead or draw me “too”. It is an entity in itself, and I am carried upon it.

    At the same time, the green & blue become ‘us’, the sojourners.

    Highest marks for this one, Laz.

    Peace and joy,
    Sanna


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