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Oldest wood,
Silver, aquamarine,
Make this day,

By Laz.F. 31/3/2010

6 Responses to “___Shine___”

  1. Beautiful – your use of colors and silver remind me of the book The Anthropology of Turquoise: Reflections on Desert, Sea, Stone, and Sky by Ellen Meloy – if you have not read it – it is VERY good and the idea of making the day shire goes right along with what Meloy talks about!! Anyways, thanks for making me thing of this novel as i loved it and thanks for the beautiful poem!

  2. Cool – i am glad you like it 🙂 You had such a strong resemblance to her I thought you would like it !!!

  3. Short and sweet. 🙂

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