Laz Freedman's Poetry Blog
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Night falls,
Deep calls,
Cold barrel,
Gun blue,
Stays dark,
Dog’s bark

By Laz.F. 27/3/2010

11 Responses to “__Nightfall__”

  1. I love it! I wrote a poetry book. I am going to post on my blog here and there. i would love your feedback on them.

  2. a lovely image with nice sound effects.well done

  3. Nice to hear a praise from you!

  4. Very crisp. I like it!

  5. love love love…abit ironic today you write about dogs barking…i saw wolves today and have heard them howling in my head non-stop….just a beautiful sound…anyway great poem…i look forward to everyday’s….

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