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Rare Pork

Refined mind only, dogs dig it all up, scrapes, and escapes, within,

Moonlight breaks, wave’s goodbye soon, can’t ever say that again.

By Laz.F. 25/2/2010

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2 Responses to “Rare Pork”

  1. Brevity with impact. Like concluding line. A lot.


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